Chp2 pg 23
Its safe to assume that Trystan is a sound sleeper
And Im back! Still recovering from an exhausting week of crunch but im really happy to get this page out. Thanks for your patience!
This is a week late but i wanted to share that “Chasing the Sunset” just had its 10 year anniversary! That’s a crazy achievement for a webcomic so bravo!
I should probably ask, do you guys have difficulty reading the bone doll’s text?
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Nope
I have no problem at all with reading the bone dolls text.
And, the doll will be back for Tristan. Or they will meet again, somehow.
Agreed, she’ll be back. Like… in the morning or something, so Tristan won’t worry for her ^^
Wild guess: it’d be funny if the Dreamer was stopped by an “invisible wall” because she shared a bond with Tristan and couldn’t go too far from her
I’ve got a bit of a problem to read doll’s texts, but a slight one, really. Maybe putting a bit more space between the letters would help.
I had a little trouble, but nothing major. Making the font size larger could help.
Whoa! I just realized Trystan just turned her light on. Maybe she heard the window shutting. hmmm…now I gotta wait a week? Man….
I don’t think that was her light, just a light next to her window. Of course, I’m not entirely sure, but – based on perspective – it looks like the next room over.
That is correct, Trystan lives in one of the Turret rooms. The lighted room is most likely a study with the fire place still going, just pure ambiance at this point.
No problem reading the bone dolls text, as long as I expand the window to fill my computer screen. I think the style of the text lends to the ‘character’ of the doll, so I like it!
Revenge? Uh oh, it can’t be Phinny?
About the font yeah, the letters are a bit close and the font could be 1 to 2 sizes larger. I’m less on aesthetics and wouldn’t mind the words crowding the speech bubble.
Also, I’m happy we’re getting a hint of Perrane now than later.
Hey everyone, thank you for the feedback on the text! I stare at these pages for several hours when i work on them, usually zoomed in about 5 times larger so its hard for me to judge. I will try making some minor adjustments like what was suggested.