Chp2 pg 24
Revenge is a dish best served…oh…right.
This conversation happens every century or so. It’s just easier to forget sometimes.
Future pages promise more details on the nature of the doll’s curse.
New Voting Incentive. Page roughs for this weeks updates. I fiddled around with this one a lot. I was also forced to cut some text out, but what can you do.
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Ooh, I love this new page, but I have a suggestion. At first, I thought she was calling her owl an idiot, angry with him instead of herself. Maybe you could turn her around so the owl’s still coming, but we’re not confused by who she’s talking to.
Keep up the good work!
I thought Owl was the one who said that…but then I saw the bubble arrow…
hmmm, interesting that the owl is causing confusion.
Its not really a spoiler to say that the owl never talks…at least not in my current script XD. I went ahead and removed it from the last panel…poor owl.
it was really just that he text was pink…and the owl was pink…and I’m an idiot.
Ha, i think that was the biggest problem actually. I have used purple for emphasis before but i didn’t stop to think how that would look near the owl.
Ah, yes – poor owl~! But I think the edit helps in the end. It was a bit distracting seeing the owl there while having the self pity talk during the same time. Now we can focus on dreamers self pity! Hehe!
Agreed! I like the change.
The owl seems like a boss, I think he can take it.